"Right in his Belly!"

Wednesday, January 28, 2015


He had a belly that begged to be slugged, and he had a bad habit of showing it off. It's like he was asking for it. And he had a mouth that didn't know when to quit. And now 10 biker-gang toughs had him in the clear California sunlight outside their clubhouse, ready to deal him a bad belly-ache.

He's in black boots, tight jeans, and he's shirtless, with only a short black-leather vest open in front.

They're around him in a ragged ring, roughing him up. He staggers stupidly from a shove; one of them grabs his shoulder, spins him around. As he stands astonished the thug hauls off with his fist and whomps him in the belly.

"OOF!" Lips rounded out in a belly-button O announce his ache. Eyes go wide with the panic of feeling all the breath socked out of him and knuckles deep in his stomach. With first touch of a fist on his belly he's broken. Can't fake it. Can't hide it. Total humiliation. He's sobbing, staggering, gasping, cradling his poor punched belly. A punch in his gut stole his voice and everything else.

A different biker rips him upright, throws him back to the clubhouse wall, and holds him there by the neck. "You're the pussy who likes to belly-ache about us, eh? I'll give you something to BELLY-ache about!" and with that the thug slams a fist into his stomach.

He had no air left to lose. His whole body looked like it wanted to explode out of him -- bug-eyed, tongue pushed out, fingers flared. And the middle of him crumpled in, T-boned by a fist.

The bully swung him around to face the rest of them and held him there for all to enjoy the sight of him looking down, gasping, at his own exposed belly, the fist-mark pink on his stomach. His mouth is tragic, and he has that comical look in his eyes like he was being eaten from inside.

Then the bruiser shoves him and he drops to his knees in full windedness, with a fist-mark branded on his belly.

But their hands grip him and pull him. They're just beginning to have their fun. His face is wide-eyed, mouth twisted in the supreme effort to draw a breath into his stunned body.

The one who started it rudely hammers another punch to his belly. With a sour "UUH!" belly-boy instantly folds over, cradling his stomach, gasping at the ground and mooing out a low, loud bellyache.

They pluck him upright again. He stands stiff and winded, with agony in his face. They shove him around the circle, twice. He, unresisting, staggering. His mind is one punch behind reality. Flapping arms like a flightless bird, he blunders belly-first into every fist ready to greets him.

The moment he got punched in the stomach his whole body would go limp. The way he took it you'd think he got hit in the belly with a wrecking ball. And his face would burst into the most comical OOF-expression. His eyes would go crossed and bug out. His cheeks puffed, like he was stuck saying the letter O. You could really see the wind get knocked out of him.

Then he'd jack-knife forward and double up around the bellyache, with his hands pressed up under his belly and his mouth gasping at the floor. Or he'd stagger and stand breathless, feet shuffling in the bellypunch dance, while the shock of pain possesses him.

Either way he would be a man who had totally lost himself. Every punch in the stomach doubles him over or drops him to his knees gasping and cradling a bellyache.

"Hold him up," the beater demands.

Two of them grab him from behind by the arms and hair and vest and rudely pull him upright, arms away from his body, bread-basket arched out.

"Punching bag!" the beater declares, as he shoves a jab into his victim's stomach. The bare belly blurts out an "OOF!" His clenching reflex lifts his knee and bends his upper body forward, straining in their grip on his arms. His hands, pinned to his sides, claw at the air. He can't protect his midriff, and now the beater swings a full-armed uppercut into the pit of his belly. The upward force of it high in the belly rockets his body upright, wide-eyed in agony, and poses him as a perfect punching-bag target for the next fist. It's a knuckle-jab to the stomach that pins his belly-button to his spine.

They made him dance a belly-dance there. How? First they stood him up on a chair back against the back porch rail, tied his arms back to it, then kicked the chair away. The stress of being held up by his arms got to him at once and he began kicking the air and found his voice again. But they quickly silenced him with a round of punches to the belly. Watching the reaction on his face looked like he swallowed a fistful of cherry bombs and now they were blowing up in his belly one by one. Held up and helpless, he just dangled there OOF-ing while they pounded out a fist-beat on his stomach. They called that a "belly-dance."


  1. That's awesome. I loved the imagery of him stumbling around getting belly-beat.

  2. I got punched out by a smart talking wise-guy who pinched the ass of the girl I was with while out clubbing the other night. She said OWW! WTF! Dork! I got up and told him to apologize. Instead he punched me right in the solar plexus knocking my wind, and a couple mouthfulls of foam, right out of me with a short loud squeak which felt like my heart getting rammed up through my throat and out my open mouth. The blow caused my legs to kick out in front of me and I dropped, and bounced, on my butt on the hardwood floor. He grabbed me up by my ear and lifted me to my feet. BOOM! an uppercut deep in the pit my stomach forced every last remaining whisp of air from my lungs as I folded in half over his hard, punishing, up-cutting fist and my feet left the floor to which I shortly retuned landing on my elbows and knees. From there I writhed back and forth and twisted every which way as I tried to find some relief, desperate to get just a bit of wind back. It seemed to take forever to get the tiniest inkling of my wind back as time and again I found my diaphragm still frozen. finally with a crowd of people kneeling on the floor all around me and someone tugging at the waist band of my boxer squarecuts, My jeans were lowered and shirt lifted in an attempt to help me regain my breath. I finally got the faintest sip of air. Soon I was noiseily sucking in increments of my first post punch breath as I slowly worked up to a huge lung bursting intake of oxegen, sweet oxegen. Finally I was able to sit up and then got sick to my stomach. Later, after several attempts I was able to remain standing with out doubling over, pulled up and fastened my jeans, and walked home three blocks to my place with my gf who said she could not believe I was ballsy and silly enough to stand up to that big bully.
    I asked what Happened to him anyway? She said I think he was frighgtened by the way you kept convulsing around on the floor and ducked out of there after flattening your whoopped ass. He! He! This in the second day afer my ass whoopin and I am still having a hard time standing straight. I don't recall how, but I also have a shiner and a fat cheek from the boxing I took.

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  4. oof! what a humiliating belly-whomping. He sure made a belly-wimp out of you. And she saw every bit of it. You really should be tough enough to take a couple fists in the stomach. But, no, I guess he proved you don't have the BELLY for a fight. You were bellyaching so bad he got scared and snuck off!

  5. after taking the punches in your belly .the pain was so bad you couldnt feel the punches in your face ......you lose bellywimp

  6. what did your girl say to you about it ?

  7. I thought i'd check on this site again. my apologies for not being more prompt in replying but life is sudenly crazy busy esp at work. It is possible some of the facial bruising is from my returning to the floor after the second body punch lifted me completely off the floor. though I caught a hard punch right between the eyes and one to the side of my face as well,
    according to GF,. The multi color mass of bruising that covered much of my face at about ten day to two and a half weeks after the whooping was really something to see. Everyone at work and school were horrified by the look of it. Also my jaw swelled up several inches as well to match my swollen lips and nose.

    My GF thinks I took a total of maybe 6 to ten tough punches and that

    1 The much tougher bully was
    a ferocious puncher who
    nearly eviscerated or killed
    me with each and every punch.

    2 That I had a lot of guts to go
    after the muscular and fit

    3 She wants me to consider
    martial arts or karate
    training and to do strenth and
    endurance conditioning so
    might be able to handle myself
    in any future and actually put
    up a fight fight and not take
    such a one-sided beating.

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